“My Awesome World”

My awesome world

“My Awsome World”

By Cassidy Carter

Age 9


My precious daughter brought home an essay she wrote during recess.  I found it worthy of publishing here, despite her 4th grade errors…

 

“My Awsome World”

 

If I could choose to create my own world I would make it like this.

I would have NO bad guys, NO trageitys, NO weapons, NO wars, and NO drugs or bad drinks.

 

I wish no one is poor.

I wish everyone could have freedom on Earth.

I would make all food good for you.  P.S. even candy!

I would make everyone rich.

 

In my world, I would NEVER have anyone abuse children.

I wish all children would go to school.

Everyone would be treated the same.

And also, no bullying.

 

Oh, and I wish everything was made out of my faverite foods.

 

 

Yes…there is a bit of a food theme threaded through this ‘Awesome World’ idea.  My girl likes to eat!   But wouldn’t this be an awesome world?  I certainly don’t mind her food idea, cause clearly she gets the love of food from her mother.  :)

 

I didn’t want to change it a bit…not even the grammar or spelling…cause it’s hers.  All hers.

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42 Responses to “My Awesome World”

  1. Kimberly Hyatt says:

    I wish so, too, Cass! I wish it all, too.

  2. Hope says:

    Beautiful. Such insight from a child. I’ll live in her world any day.
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  3. jennifer says:

    Aw Cass!!!! So sweet! Great job girl! I wish these things too.

  4. Marcia says:

    I’m with Cass! Oh the innocence of youth (and wisdom!) Thank you for sharing! She obviously gets her love of writing from her mother as well!

  5. It’s precious. She’s precious. Oh, out of the mouths of babes. xo
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  6. Love it! Seems like the apple doesn’t fall too far from the tree. :)
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  7. Aunt Beth says:

    I love your ideas Cassidy. Some of those words will have different meanings for you as you get older, but please don’t leave behind your idealism. much love, Aunt Beth

  8. Lee Ann says:

    I’d like to sign up to live in her world! :)

  9. This sounds like a wonderful world to live in.
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  10. Meredith says:

    This is perfect. Thanks so much for sharing this here with all of us. Dreaming of this world you’ve described!
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  11. Carli says:

    I love her attitude! She has a great position on food. I think that’s so important given the obesity epidemic. I hope Cassidy reads everyones comments because she did such a great job with this.
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  12. Carol Denney says:

    What a smart girl… out of the mouth of babes. Children often see things clearer than adults. It’s really pretty simple.. If we lived the way Cassidy wants… life would be grand. Maybe children can inspire adults to be kinder, warmer, and more compassionate as well. Plus, you can’t go wrong with the food thing… Who doesn’t like candy?!?! Ha!!

    • momcafe says:

      Thank you aunt carol 4 reading it.I agree that children see things more clearer than adults because they can be smarter sometimes than adults!!!! :) I could eat your cookies all day in my awsome world, Lol :) XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

  13. Candice says:

    Love you Cass!! You created the PERFECT world in my eyes!!! I think we will be hanging out very closely together in Heaven some day!! For now, we will just have to pray for more of that world here on earth! love, Aunt Candy :) p.s. I miss you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • momcafe says:

      I MISS YOU TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if you want to sign up for my world put your adress here and phone number here. lol xoxoXOXOXOXOXOXOOOXOO cassidy

  14. I absolutely ADORE this! What a precious girl! She cares about poverty, education, and freedom. (and candy, too…good for her!!) I would seriously be bursting with pride. Well done, Cassidy. You ROCK!! (as does your mom because seriously awesome children usually come from seriously awesome parents!)
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  15. Michell says:

    Hey Chris! Awww…how cute! That’s why I LOVE kids…they’re so innocent and have such sweet hearts! It’s when we adults start imposing our likes and dislikes on them. Thanks for sharing Chris and please tell Cassidy I said “she ROCKS”!:-) Have a blessed day !
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  16. Sara says:

    Chris, this is absolutely precious! I could not agree with her more, even the parts about the food…lol! You’ve got a very insightful little lady. =)
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  17. AnnMarie says:

    What a sweetheart! I love this and the 4th grade errors make it all the sweeter! I want to live in her world. Why can’t the rest of the world get on board with the simple things? Why do us adults muck everything up?
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    • momcafe says:

      if you would like to sign up for my awsome world please put your name and your address here!!!! you are so nice. thank you so much for reading my paper!!!!!!! love cassidy :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) ;)

  18. {Melinda} Sounds like Heaven. Look forward to going there more everyday. :)
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  19. So happy you didn’t change a thing – so precious and wonderful as is. All hers. Brilliant! And I’m all in on the food theme also! ;-)
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  20. Cassidy 2016. I’m in.

    Love the platform.

    Love even more that the platform is riddled with food.

    God Bless America!
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  21. OneMommy says:

    That would be an awesome world, indeed!
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