“My Awesome World”

Posted on Jan 21 2013 - 3:54am by momcafe

“My Awsome World”

By Cassidy Carter

Age 9

My precious daughter brought home an essay she wrote during recess.  I found it worthy of publishing here, despite her 4th grade errors…


“My Awsome World”


If I could choose to create my own world I would make it like this.

I would have NO bad guys, NO trageitys, NO weapons, NO wars, and NO drugs or bad drinks.


I wish no one is poor.

I wish everyone could have freedom on Earth.

I would make all food good for you.  P.S. even candy!

I would make everyone rich.


In my world, I would NEVER have anyone abuse children.

I wish all children would go to school.

Everyone would be treated the same.

And also, no bullying.


Oh, and I wish everything was made out of my faverite foods.



Yes…there is a bit of a food theme threaded through this ‘Awesome World’ idea.  My girl likes to eat!   But wouldn’t this be an awesome world?  I certainly don’t mind her food idea, cause clearly she gets the love of food from her mother.  :)


I didn’t want to change it a bit…not even the grammar or spelling…cause it’s hers.  All hers.

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42 Comments so far. Feel free to join this conversation.

  1. Kimberly Hyatt January 21, 2013 at 4:20 am - Reply

    I wish so, too, Cass! I wish it all, too.

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 5:05 pm - Reply


      I’m so glad you like it!!!!! Love, cassidy

  2. Hope January 21, 2013 at 5:49 am - Reply

    Beautiful. Such insight from a child. I’ll live in her world any day.

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 5:09 pm - Reply

      Thank you so much Hope i’m so glad you want to live in my awsome world!!!!!!!!!! love Cassidy

  3. jennifer January 21, 2013 at 12:32 pm - Reply

    Aw Cass!!!! So sweet! Great job girl! I wish these things too.

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 5:12 pm - Reply

      Thank you for reading !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. love, Cassidy

  4. Marcia January 21, 2013 at 1:12 pm - Reply

    I’m with Cass! Oh the innocence of youth (and wisdom!) Thank you for sharing! She obviously gets her love of writing from her mother as well!

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 5:17 pm - Reply

      thank you for reading. I’m glad you liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxo love cassidy

  5. michelle @ this little light January 21, 2013 at 1:50 pm - Reply

    It’s precious. She’s precious. Oh, out of the mouths of babes. xo

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 5:21 pm - Reply

      thank you SO MUCH Michelle!!!!!!!!!!!!!. xoxo :) love cassidy

  6. another jennifer January 21, 2013 at 2:00 pm - Reply

    Love it! Seems like the apple doesn’t fall too far from the tree. :)

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 5:25 pm - Reply

      my mom says i am a lot like her! i hope my awsome world comes true someday!!!!!!!!! :) love cassidy

  7. Aunt Beth January 21, 2013 at 2:57 pm - Reply

    I love your ideas Cassidy. Some of those words will have different meanings for you as you get older, but please don’t leave behind your idealism. much love, Aunt Beth

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 9:03 pm - Reply

      Thank you so much for reading aunt Beth!!!!!!! I will always want candy to be good for you!!!!! LOL xoxoxo love cassidy

  8. Lee Ann January 21, 2013 at 4:34 pm - Reply

    I’d like to sign up to live in her world! :)

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 9:06 pm - Reply

      THANK YOU FOR SIGNING UP. PUT YOUR NAME AND ADDRESS HERE PLEASE! thank you for reading my paper. Love cassidy. :)

  9. JDaniel4's Mom January 21, 2013 at 8:32 pm - Reply

    This sounds like a wonderful world to live in.

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 9:07 pm - Reply

      Thank you very much! love, cassidy :)

  10. Meredith January 21, 2013 at 9:28 pm - Reply

    This is perfect. Thanks so much for sharing this here with all of us. Dreaming of this world you’ve described!

    • momcafe January 21, 2013 at 10:34 pm - Reply

      I dream too. i wish god could make it that way. xoxo love cassidy

  11. Carli January 21, 2013 at 11:53 pm - Reply

    I love her attitude! She has a great position on food. I think that’s so important given the obesity epidemic. I hope Cassidy reads everyones comments because she did such a great job with this.

    • momcafe January 22, 2013 at 3:07 pm - Reply

      dear Carli thank you so much for reading My awesome world . I really appreciate it!!!!!!!!!!. xoxo cassidy

  12. Carol Denney January 22, 2013 at 12:51 am - Reply

    What a smart girl… out of the mouth of babes. Children often see things clearer than adults. It’s really pretty simple.. If we lived the way Cassidy wants… life would be grand. Maybe children can inspire adults to be kinder, warmer, and more compassionate as well. Plus, you can’t go wrong with the food thing… Who doesn’t like candy?!?! Ha!!

    • momcafe January 22, 2013 at 3:15 pm - Reply

      Thank you aunt carol 4 reading it.I agree that children see things more clearer than adults because they can be smarter sometimes than adults!!!! :) I could eat your cookies all day in my awsome world, Lol :) XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

  13. Candice January 22, 2013 at 1:57 pm - Reply

    Love you Cass!! You created the PERFECT world in my eyes!!! I think we will be hanging out very closely together in Heaven some day!! For now, we will just have to pray for more of that world here on earth! love, Aunt Candy :) p.s. I miss you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • momcafe January 22, 2013 at 3:17 pm - Reply

      I MISS YOU TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if you want to sign up for my world put your adress here and phone number here. lol xoxoXOXOXOXOXOXOOOXOO cassidy

  14. The Dose of Reality January 22, 2013 at 5:04 pm - Reply

    I absolutely ADORE this! What a precious girl! She cares about poverty, education, and freedom. (and candy, too…good for her!!) I would seriously be bursting with pride. Well done, Cassidy. You ROCK!! (as does your mom because seriously awesome children usually come from seriously awesome parents!)

    • momcafe January 23, 2013 at 12:18 am - Reply

      dear lisa thank you so much for reading My awesome world!!!!!!!!!! love, cassidy.xoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxo :) ;):)

  15. Michell January 22, 2013 at 6:08 pm - Reply

    Hey Chris! Awww…how cute! That’s why I LOVE kids…they’re so innocent and have such sweet hearts! It’s when we adults start imposing our likes and dislikes on them. Thanks for sharing Chris and please tell Cassidy I said “she ROCKS”!:-) Have a blessed day !

    • momcafe January 22, 2013 at 9:14 pm - Reply

      thanks for saying that michell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) love, cassidy

  16. Sara January 22, 2013 at 7:01 pm - Reply

    Chris, this is absolutely precious! I could not agree with her more, even the parts about the food…lol! You’ve got a very insightful little lady. =)

    • momcafe January 22, 2013 at 9:12 pm - Reply

      hi sara! This is cassidy. my mom is making me do the coments part. my favorite food is pizza!!!!! :) :) thank you so much for reading my paper!!!! xoxo

  17. AnnMarie January 23, 2013 at 5:36 am - Reply

    What a sweetheart! I love this and the 4th grade errors make it all the sweeter! I want to live in her world. Why can’t the rest of the world get on board with the simple things? Why do us adults muck everything up?

    • momcafe January 23, 2013 at 9:58 pm - Reply

      if you would like to sign up for my awsome world please put your name and your address here!!!! you are so nice. thank you so much for reading my paper!!!!!!! love cassidy :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) ;)

  18. Mothering From Scratch January 23, 2013 at 4:41 pm - Reply

    {Melinda} Sounds like Heaven. Look forward to going there more everyday. :)

    • momcafe January 23, 2013 at 9:56 pm - Reply

      HEAVEN WILL BE GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love cassidy :) :) :) :) :)

  19. Mary @ A Teachable Mom January 23, 2013 at 8:19 pm - Reply

    So happy you didn’t change a thing – so precious and wonderful as is. All hers. Brilliant! And I’m all in on the food theme also! ;-)

    • momcafe January 23, 2013 at 10:09 pm - Reply

      hi mary!!!! good thing you said that because i am on the BAD side of my report card for grammer and spelling!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you have a good day !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):):):) love cassidy

  20. Eli@coachdaddy January 23, 2013 at 8:21 pm - Reply

    Cassidy 2016. I’m in.

    Love the platform.

    Love even more that the platform is riddled with food.

    God Bless America!

    • momcafe January 23, 2013 at 9:51 pm - Reply

      i would TOTALLY take the honor to be president the year of 2016!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) thank you for reading!!! from, cassidy

  21. OneMommy January 26, 2013 at 4:56 pm - Reply

    That would be an awesome world, indeed!

    • momcafe January 26, 2013 at 5:06 pm - Reply

      thank you so much for your comment. it means a lot to me! love, cassidy :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

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