“My Awesome World”

“My Awsome World”

By Cassidy Carter

Age 9


My precious daughter brought home an essay she wrote during recess.  I found it worthy of publishing here, despite her 4th grade errors…

 

“My Awsome World”

 

If I could choose to create my own world I would make it like this.

I would have NO bad guys, NO trageitys, NO weapons, NO wars, and NO drugs or bad drinks.

 

I wish no one is poor.

I wish everyone could have freedom on Earth.

I would make all food good for you.  P.S. even candy!

I would make everyone rich.

 

In my world, I would NEVER have anyone abuse children.

I wish all children would go to school.

Everyone would be treated the same.

And also, no bullying.

 

Oh, and I wish everything was made out of my faverite foods.

 

 

Yes…there is a bit of a food theme threaded through this ‘Awesome World’ idea.  My girl likes to eat!   But wouldn’t this be an awesome world?  I certainly don’t mind her food idea, cause clearly she gets the love of food from her mother.  :)

 

I didn’t want to change it a bit…not even the grammar or spelling…cause it’s hers.  All hers.

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Comments

  1. says

    I’m with Cass! Oh the innocence of youth (and wisdom!) Thank you for sharing! She obviously gets her love of writing from her mother as well!

  2. Aunt Beth says

    I love your ideas Cassidy. Some of those words will have different meanings for you as you get older, but please don’t leave behind your idealism. much love, Aunt Beth

  3. says

    I love her attitude! She has a great position on food. I think that’s so important given the obesity epidemic. I hope Cassidy reads everyones comments because she did such a great job with this.

  4. Carol Denney says

    What a smart girl… out of the mouth of babes. Children often see things clearer than adults. It’s really pretty simple.. If we lived the way Cassidy wants… life would be grand. Maybe children can inspire adults to be kinder, warmer, and more compassionate as well. Plus, you can’t go wrong with the food thing… Who doesn’t like candy?!?! Ha!!

    • says

      Thank you aunt carol 4 reading it.I agree that children see things more clearer than adults because they can be smarter sometimes than adults!!!! :) I could eat your cookies all day in my awsome world, Lol :) XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

  5. Candice says

    Love you Cass!! You created the PERFECT world in my eyes!!! I think we will be hanging out very closely together in Heaven some day!! For now, we will just have to pray for more of that world here on earth! love, Aunt Candy :) p.s. I miss you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • says

      I MISS YOU TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if you want to sign up for my world put your adress here and phone number here. lol xoxoXOXOXOXOXOXOOOXOO cassidy

  6. says

    I absolutely ADORE this! What a precious girl! She cares about poverty, education, and freedom. (and candy, too…good for her!!) I would seriously be bursting with pride. Well done, Cassidy. You ROCK!! (as does your mom because seriously awesome children usually come from seriously awesome parents!)

  7. says

    Hey Chris! Awww…how cute! That’s why I LOVE kids…they’re so innocent and have such sweet hearts! It’s when we adults start imposing our likes and dislikes on them. Thanks for sharing Chris and please tell Cassidy I said “she ROCKS”!:-) Have a blessed day !

  8. says

    Chris, this is absolutely precious! I could not agree with her more, even the parts about the food…lol! You’ve got a very insightful little lady. =)

  9. says

    What a sweetheart! I love this and the 4th grade errors make it all the sweeter! I want to live in her world. Why can’t the rest of the world get on board with the simple things? Why do us adults muck everything up?

    • says

      if you would like to sign up for my awsome world please put your name and your address here!!!! you are so nice. thank you so much for reading my paper!!!!!!! love cassidy :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) 😉

    • says

      hi mary!!!! good thing you said that because i am on the BAD side of my report card for grammer and spelling!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you have a good day !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):):):) love cassidy

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